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Bill King

        1965- 2023

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Catching the Heart Off-guard

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"Appalachian poets and artists gave me my voice and focus. I realized that I didn’t have to be anything other than who I was, which had everything to do with where I was."

- Bill King

   Bill King:

The Grown Boy 

~  by Doug Van Gundy

 

 

Bill was all of these things because he was a person who believed. He

believed in the surpassing beauty of a brook trout, the therapeutic power of sinking one’s hands into the soil,

the idea that nothing should be beneath our notice, and nobody should be beneath our empathy, that no place, child, or dog, is unworthy of love.

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Raised in the Blue Ridge, Bill lived

the entirety of his too-short life in the Appalachian region.  He loved these mountains, and he hiked and fished

all through them. His brilliant

collection of poems, Bloodroot, provides us pages and pages of evidence that nobody ever loved the rivers, streams and forests of

West Virginia more than he did.

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Bill was a kind of a throwback, an

old-school Appalachian man of the Robert Penn Warren or Wendell Berry stripe: erudite, scholarly, curious,

yet still rooted in the soil. He was

a gentleman and a gentle man who made time for poems and pole beans, who found time for kids and kites and hikes and dogs, who led through humor and humility and who saw none of

these things as weak, despite being surrounded by claims to the contrary.

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I now recognize  that Bill was also reclaiming a kind of masculinity that

is at odds with what we’ve come to expect of American men, a masculinity grounded in love and listening, care

and kindness, hard work and a soft heart. This is the masculinity I

associate with the West Virginia of my childhood, the masculinity of our grandfathers and great-grandfathers. Bill demonstrated it can be the masculinity of the current generation. May it become the default masculinity of our sons and grandsons as well.

During the last ten years of Bill’s life,

I was fortunate enough to have him

as my poetry partner-in-crime. We

had been friends before that, but we were the kind of friends who have coffee three or four times a year, bemoaning how they never get to see one another. More than acquaintances, but not close. That all changed in the fall of 2012.

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In late October, while preparing for Hurricane Sandy and nearly two feet

of snow that would fall on West Virginia, Bill was up on a ladder helping neighbors weatherproof their homes when he felt a sharp pain in his right side. Suspecting appendicitis, he drove himself to the hospital, only to

be sent on to a regional hospital where he was diagnosed with a rare form of cancer. He immediately underwent

the first of many surgeries and was

sent home to heal in advance of chemotherapy.

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His friends, near and far, wanted to

do something, anything, to help Bill

and his family. In the early days of his convalescence, I loaned him dozens

of books of poetry and frequently read aloud to him for an hour or more when he was especially tired or weak.

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As he regained his strength, he and I began writing together. From then on, and for the next decade, we’d see

each other most Fridays. We’d meet early at one or the other of our homes for coffee, pastries, and a few hours

of careful and compassionate work

on each other’s poems.

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Sometimes we’d read to one another and offer suggestions, sometimes we drafted new poems at the kitchen table. Sometimes we gave each other homework. When we were over-caffeinated and bleary-eyed, we’d go fishing, or get lunch, or both, ending

the day by drinking a cold beer or

two and listening to the alternative

rock hits of our college years.

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I think it's safe to say there's not

a poem Bill wrote in those years that

I didn't see in an early draft form.

I know the opposite is true. Editing

and revising each other's work was

a big part of our practice. We fell

into a natural rhythm because we

had similar writing routines. We

both liked to work through two or

three handwritten drafts before

entering anything into the computer.

We both believed in extensive revision, revisiting a poem again and again, changing and shaping a word

at a time until it’s able to say what

it means to say.

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We also shared a common goal

for poetry: that it should foster empathy and an awareness of the world around us. We believed poems should make sense but should also make sound, that they should have music to them, both rhythm and melody. We believed poems should be about communication at almost every level.

in 2018, Finishing Line Press published The Letting Go, a chapbook of 31 of Bill King's poems which later grew into Bloodroot.

Seven of his poems   from Bloodroot 

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         Why I Can Stand Here Now, 

              Telling You This Story

         beginning with a line from Mark Jarman

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When things began to happen, and I knew it,

I was thirteen going on fourteen, hanging

out with my adopted friend Ben, who, though

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welcomed by those foreign to him, stole change

from his father's sock drawer (because he's not 

​my father, he said) before breaking into the â€‹country

 

store at the bottom of Bent Mountain. At Rierson's,​

farmers filled up trucks and teenagers smelling

of chicken shit drank soda and played pinball

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after a shift packing eggs. He went to jail for that,

and though not as smart as him, I was the one who

drove down the mountain to college. Once, free

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after school until our parents came home, Ben

showed me how to ping hubcaps from the ridge

below my house, over-pumping the Remington

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and sighting over the creek and through the pines

at the occasional car weaving its way along

the narrow road, sinuous as a black snake

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sunning in the grass. I took my shot at a green

station wagon moving slow as a hearse

but heard nothing, until a policeman's tires

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churned gravel in the drive an hour later.

He stepped out of a blue-gray cloud

to find me whittling on the porch. No sir,

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I said, hardly glancing up from my chunk

of wood. We were throwing rocks over the creek.

That was a walking stick in my hand. I had not

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yet even asked a girl to dance, but there I sat

telling stories like I was born to it and couldn't stop.

​May I be struck dead where I stand, I said

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to my father, later, looking square into his smelt-

colored eyes. And because I wasn't, by him

or God - I turned my back and walked.

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  This World Should Be Enough

 

  Walking the rails, looking out –

  field daisies stand at attention,

  and in the darkest hole along this long,

  hot stretch, a big trout rolls. It’s the flash,

  I guess, that catches my eye, and

  the daisies, until further below

  a fierce-headed merganser

  zagging up current with six behind

  makes me stop. Lord, I know that this is it.

  This world should be enough. But the blue pulls 

  my eyes skyward then, and I am rising

  above a man with everything to lose:

  He’s looking downriver at a thread of water,

  lit like a show-burning fuse.​​​​

Grown Boy Dreams of Water

 

I’m carrying a bucket down the mountain

again, looking for the creek’s moon-glint

 

because my mother’s rock-garden is dry,

but the closer I get, the more the water

 

curves away. I go off-trail, trying to correct,

but arm-thick laurel weaves green hells,

 

closing overhead, and as their pink buds swell,

I’m climbing – toward a keyhole that opens

 

into a bald of bounders. Here, above tree line,

the sky is a kerosene globe, trimmed low

 

enough for stars, which I see from the bottom

of my father’s johnboat – hauled from South

 

Carolina to central Appalachia and beached

on the edge of a field. Sometimes I’d unlean

 

it from its pine, tug it through tall grass

and stare into a deep blue ocean. For a time,

I fit between

 

the bench seats prone – a tiny bone in the boat’s deep ear, intent on the sound of water.

Going down the Hall on a Gurney

 

Beneath a silver sky,

men on mowers sheet

the wild green tongues

of a meadow. But that

must have been yesterday,

because now a half a dozen boys,

each as straight and tall as a little i

bend in the middle toward home,

singing Hey batter, batter -

Listen to my chatter, batter batter –

Su-wing! – an incantation cracked

open by wood on ball rising

so high it is a tiny comet skirting

the sun. It is streaking towards

a horse that always grazes

in the pasture beyond and now

the leftfielder launches: he hangs

suspended: I can see him clearly,

as if I were lying

in the grass beneath:

the glove hand, open wide

for something he can

never snare: the red cap,

name and number scrawled

black under the brim;

the red t-shirt, plump white P

over the heart, and blue

bell bottoms, yellow paisley

patches on each knee,

stretched tight and let out

twice for legs that trail

like a great heron

taking flight. Such awkward

beauty, I think, trying to make

out the face –

until the slightly parted lips

of a woman droop

into view; they lean

like a heavy bloom over

a still spring pool.

Can you tell me your name?

they say. And can you tell

me your date of birth? Yes,

I say to the white, blunt petals

of bloodroot that flutter

as she breaths. I was born in May,

I say to the purple

woods behind them.

I was born in May.

The Pond

 

Because two horses

lifted their heads beneath

an apple tree at the top of the hill

and snorted

 

I waded across the creek,

slipped beneath the barbed wire

that stitched the hem

of old man Warner’s field

 

and rowed my arms

through late summer grass

before stepping out of the field

and into the rut

the horses had made

to gorge on sweet green apples

spotted with mold

 

From beneath this tree,

I first saw old man Warner’s pond

pushing clouds along the earth

and that is when I first saw everything

that was between here and there

 

the smell of clover and carrion

the snap of grasshopper wings

the sudden cross of a red-tail blown sideways

and circling

watching everything below

even the bullfrogs flopping and turtles sliding

into dark water

 

I walked full ‘round twice,

not knowing what I had found

nor that this was the first of a thousand future           leavings

of which I still can never tell anyone

where or why I am going.

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"His poems - to paraphrase Seamus Heaney - “come at you sideways, and catch the heart off-guard and blow it open.”

Bill King wasn't a perfect person,

but he was an awfully good one. If you knew him, you already know

how lucky you are. If you didn’t,

allow me to introduce him the only

way I still can, through story and memory and the generous poems

he left us.

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It is common knowledge that

Bill was a poet and a teacher, but he was also a husband, father, friend, obsessive gardener and semi-fanatical fisherman. Bill frequently referred

to himself as a “grown boy,” and

that’s how I remember him best.

He was proof that it’s possible to become an adult while keeping intact the sense of wonder that’s the

lingua franca of childhood.

 

That wonder made Bill an exemplary, much-praised teacher. His empathy, quality of attention, and bone-deep

love of this world made him a gifted poet and a treasured friend.

 

Professor Bill King taught literature

and writing to students at Davis and Elkins College in Elkins, West Virginia for 27 years.  He was the grown-up

at the front of the classroom, yet he evangelized a child-like curiosity and excitement about literature as the only possible response to the miracle of the written word.

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He was also the guy in the neighborhood who had the greenest thumb, the biggest pumpkins, the sweetest-smelling roses and the hand-painted sign between his flowerbed

and the street that read, We love our sunshine, please consider parking a little further down the block.

"This was the first of a thousand future leavings / of which I still can never tell anyone / where or why I am going."

                                                                                            ~ Bill King, "The Pond"

Bill had a wonderfully soft touch as an editor, always considering what I wanted

for the poem rather than what he wanted. He had a great ear for sound and a great

sense of whether an image was “true” or not. His feedback never failed to make my poems better. I hope he would have said the same of mine.

 

Bill always worked to convince his students that people from any cultural and

economic background could make art, could aspire to literature, could be themselves

and tell their stories and that those stories would be valuable to the world. Dozens of

his former students, some of whom graduated 20 years earlier, returned to Elkins for Bill's memorial, as did the nurses from Bill’s oncology ward who fell in love with his tenderness and good humor while he was under their care. That speaks volumes.       

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Of course, for those who didn’t know Bill (and many who did), his poetry is his most durable and enduring legacy. As one might expect, Bill's poetry showcases

and explores his love of the natural world, West Virginia, the Appalachian region, fishing, his family and students, as well as his own mortality. It is a generous poetry

full of tenderness and close attention that rewards multiple readings.

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Of all the poems in Bloodroot, perhaps none offers a more accurate self-portrait than “Grown Boy Dreams of Water.” Water in all of its guises - streams, rivers,

rain and ponds - plays an important role in the mythology of Bill’s poems, as does dreaming, boyhood, and the importance of our connection to the natural world.

 

In this poem, the grown boy remembers the actual boy of his childhood, and the

dream journeys that are still possible before the tragedy of adolescence. Here, the

vehicle of the dream journey is his father’s displaced johnboat, made for the marshes

and estuaries of the coastal Carolinas, now dry-rotting in the mountains of Virginia.

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                 (…) Here, above tree-line,

the sky is a kerosene globe trimmed low

 

enough for stars, which I see from the bottom

of my father’s johnboat—hauled from South

 

Carolina to central Appalachia and beached

on the edge of a field. Sometimes, I’d unlean

 

it from its pine, tug it through tall grass, and stare

into a deep blue ocean.  (…)

                        from “The Grown Boy Dreams of Water”

 

While the story is never fully told, readers get a sense of the never-to-be-resolved

tension between the expectations of a stern Southern father and the gentler, more

open-hearted sensibilities of his dreamy poet son.

 

Bill had a gift for combining seemingly disconnected images into poems that are

both familiar and strange. In “Going Down the Hall on a Gurney,” for example,

the narrator, coming out of anesthesia after yet another cancer surgery, interrupts a

drug-induced reverie of boyhood baseball (Hey batter batter,  listen to my chatter,

batter batter - Suh-wing!) with a hallucination of the lips of the surgical nurse.

In his anesthetized mind, they become the snowy-white petals of the bloodroot,

the delicate spring ephemeral that gives the book its title.

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... Can you tell me your name?

they say, And can you tell me

your date of birth? Yes,

I say, to the white blunt petals

of bloodroot that flutter

as she breathes. I was born

in May, I say to the purple

woods behind them,

I was born in May.

            from “Going Down the Hall on a Gurney”

 

This delightful, disorienting strangeness is but one of many enduring pleasures

to be found in Bill’s poems.

 

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On one of the last afternoons Bill and I spent working together on poems, we

sat in his backyard, going over the galleys of Bloodroot. He was so proud to see

his work presented so carefully and beautifully.

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He was also excited at the prospect of traveling around the region giving readings,

once the book was published. He had made plans to read at the Southern Festival

of the Book that October, and at the Appalachian Studies Association Conference

the following spring. Sadly, Bill never read publicly from the book, but he would

have been delighted at its success.

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That last afternoon, we sat in his back yard next to a fishpond no bigger than a

folding table, while we discussed Bloodroot and dreamed of giving readings and

traveling to conferences. Bill and his son Walter made that little pond, digging it out

and lining it, stocking it with fish and planting cattails along its bank. It was one of

his favorite places, appearing again and again in Bloodroot. One of my favorite

poems features that backyard pond and the frogs who’d visit each spring. In that poem, “Winter Song, ” he mourns the ephemeral nature of spring and longs to hear the spring peeper’s first call.  It provides a perfect accidental elegy for my friend, himself a lover of evening rain.

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(…) all of this has gone now

unfleshed except for sky

scarred with jet trails

going anywhere but here

 

lover of evening rain

lover of last light

lover of small still water

that gazes at leaves

all summer

 

come back

                        from “Winter Song”

 

The novelist Tom Robbins once wrote, “It’s never too late to have a happy childhood.” I think Bill believed that too and believed it was possible for everyone: his own amazing children (now grown), the boy whose blood he shed with a thrown stone forty years ago, the child that he himself was, and the “grown boy” he became, and by extension, you and me. Everyone. His optimism and open-heartedness live on in his powerful poems.

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Like the man himself, Bill’s poems are full of compassion and attention and intelligence. They are grounded in the natural world but establish no boundaries between where we end and the woods begin. His poems - to paraphrase

Nobel laureate Seamus Heaney - “come at you sideways, and catch the heart

off-guard and blow it open.”

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Poets Bill King, John Hoppenthaler, and Doug Van Gundy

 In 2021, Bill King received The Heartwood Poetry Award.  In 2024, he was awarded

the Weatherford Prize for outstanding poetry for Bloodroot.

Davis and Elkins College has re-named their Writers Week, which Bill created,

to "Dr. Bill King Writers’ Week.”  

Doug Van Gundy directs the Low-Residency MFA program in Creative Writing at West Virginia Wesleyan College in Buckhannon, WV.  His poems and essays are widely anthologized and have appeared in dozens of journals.  He co-edited the anthology Eyes Glowing at the Edge of the Woods: Contemporary Writing from

West Virginia and published a book of poems, A Life above Water (Red Hen Press).  His second poetry collection is forthcoming. He has played fiddle, guitar,

mandolin, banjo and harmonica for 27 years in the old-time string duo, Born Old

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The Wasp

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Like green willows cut back, then cut 

again, the surgeon’s scalpel removes each 

season’s stubborn new growth, stunted 

by poisonous drip. I zombie to work 

 

and back, yet live, and in living, love 

and grieve all those who came before, 

who risked and lost—pounds of flesh 

and good-time friends, and that one 

 

last hope, before the end.  I can’t call it 

a win - what they’ve given. Time. 

To scrutinize eternity—as carefully 

as this wasp perched on the rounded

 

hill of my eraser.  Forced out the vent 

by the first furnace blast of the year, 

she makes one tiny-footed, antennae-

twitching rotation, before flying 

 

toward the arched forest of golden 

fern just outside the window.  

Trapped, she bumps from glass 

to glass, seeking late autumn light. 

 

Though frost soon rimes the grass, 

and I’ve little energy to muster, 

I offer the sugared lip of my coffee 

cup and walk her out the door.

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Winter Song

          after W.S. Merwin

 

I miss the spring peeper

who crawled out

the rain fed pond

all summer

until  each one

green and wood frogs too

buried themselves in mud

beneath ice or snow

 

and I miss the first big rain

that made little throats trill

from bent stems

of elderberry and curly willow

from green leaves of young maple

that shade the street

behind the grocer

that faces route 33

and the rest of the world

 

all of this has gone now

unfleshed except for sky

scarred with jet trails

going anywhere but here

 

lover of evening rain

lover of last light

lover of small still water

that gazes at leaves

all summer

              

come back

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Bloodroot tributes

and reviews 

Bloodroot knows what the land knows. Each of these exquisitely crafted, deeply ecological, humid poems accumulate into a "bildungsroman" for the grown. May it be offered at every library, every hospital chapel, every seed store in the valleys. Bill King has given us an instant classic. .            - Poetry Daily                    

Bill King does not avoid asking the big questions.  ... It is the speaker’s consistent, childlike curiosity that allows him to become transfixed at a pond’s surface reflecting the sky, in wonder about “everything / that was between here and there.” “Here” being the physical world, “there” being the spiritual or metaphysical.

              - Still, The Journal

I think Bill, in Bloodroot, whether you were a friend or a stranger to him, left us what he most wanted us to know: how to be in the world in such a way that when you come to die you won’t discover that you haven’t lived.

                  - Gordon Johnson, poet

"Beautiful, honest, generous, the poems in Bloodroot ask us to look closely at what we often call the dying world and instead see the thousand daily resurrections there,"

                    - Ann Pancake, WV author

"He writes with the deep intelligence that knits the natural world to metaphor and gives us a usable model for how to love this mortal place even as we know we are leaving it."   

     - Marc Harshman. WV poet laureate

One more word from Bill:

 

My advice: Find your sacred spaces, whether physical or virtual, visit them as often as possible, and guard them jealously.

- Columbia (University) Journal​

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