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Bill King
1965- 2023
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Catching the Heart Off-guard

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"Appalachian poets and artists gave me my voice and focus. I realized that I didn’t have to be anything other than who I was, which had everything to do with where I was."
- Bill King

Bill King:
The Grown Boy
~ by Doug Van Gundy
Bill was all of these things because he was a person who believed. He
believed in the surpassing beauty of a brook trout, the therapeutic power of sinking one’s hands into the soil,
the idea that nothing should be beneath our notice, and nobody should be beneath our empathy, that no place, child, or dog, is unworthy of love.
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Raised in the Blue Ridge, Bill lived
the entirety of his too-short life in the Appalachian region. He loved these mountains, and he hiked and fished
all through them. His brilliant
collection of poems, Bloodroot, provides us pages and pages of evidence that nobody ever loved the rivers, streams and forests of
West Virginia more than he did.
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Bill was a kind of a throwback, an
old-school Appalachian man of the Robert Penn Warren or Wendell Berry stripe: erudite, scholarly, curious,
yet still rooted in the soil. He was
a gentleman and a gentle man who made time for poems and pole beans, who found time for kids and kites and hikes and dogs, who led through humor and humility and who saw none of
these things as weak, despite being surrounded by claims to the contrary.
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I now recognize that Bill was also reclaiming a kind of masculinity that
is at odds with what we’ve come to expect of American men, a masculinity grounded in love and listening, care
and kindness, hard work and a soft heart. This is the masculinity I
associate with the West Virginia of my childhood, the masculinity of our grandfathers and great-grandfathers. Bill demonstrated it can be the masculinity of the current generation. May it become the default masculinity of our sons and grandsons as well.
During the last ten years of Bill’s life,
I was fortunate enough to have him
as my poetry partner-in-crime. We
had been friends before that, but we were the kind of friends who have coffee three or four times a year, bemoaning how they never get to see one another. More than acquaintances, but not close. That all changed in the fall of 2012.
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In late October, while preparing for Hurricane Sandy and nearly two feet
of snow that would fall on West Virginia, Bill was up on a ladder helping neighbors weatherproof their homes when he felt a sharp pain in his right side. Suspecting appendicitis, he drove himself to the hospital, only to
be sent on to a regional hospital where he was diagnosed with a rare form of cancer. He immediately underwent
the first of many surgeries and was
sent home to heal in advance of chemotherapy.
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His friends, near and far, wanted to
do something, anything, to help Bill
and his family. In the early days of his convalescence, I loaned him dozens
of books of poetry and frequently read aloud to him for an hour or more when he was especially tired or weak.
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As he regained his strength, he and I began writing together. From then on, and for the next decade, we’d see
each other most Fridays. We’d meet early at one or the other of our homes for coffee, pastries, and a few hours
of careful and compassionate work
on each other’s poems.
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Sometimes we’d read to one another and offer suggestions, sometimes we drafted new poems at the kitchen table. Sometimes we gave each other homework. When we were over-caffeinated and bleary-eyed, we’d go fishing, or get lunch, or both, ending
the day by drinking a cold beer or
two and listening to the alternative
rock hits of our college years.
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I think it's safe to say there's not
a poem Bill wrote in those years that
I didn't see in an early draft form.
I know the opposite is true. Editing
and revising each other's work was
a big part of our practice. We fell
into a natural rhythm because we
had similar writing routines. We
both liked to work through two or
three handwritten drafts before
entering anything into the computer.
We both believed in extensive revision, revisiting a poem again and again, changing and shaping a word
at a time until it’s able to say what
it means to say.
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We also shared a common goal
for poetry: that it should foster empathy and an awareness of the world around us. We believed poems should make sense but should also make sound, that they should have music to them, both rhythm and melody. We believed poems should be about communication at almost every level.








in 2018, Finishing Line Press published The Letting Go, a chapbook of 31 of Bill King's poems which later grew into Bloodroot.

Seven of his poems from Bloodroot
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Why I Can Stand Here Now,
Telling You This Story
beginning with a line from Mark Jarman
​
When things began to happen, and I knew it,
I was thirteen going on fourteen, hanging
out with my adopted friend Ben, who, though
​
welcomed by those foreign to him, stole change
from his father's sock drawer (because he's not
​my father, he said) before breaking into the ​country
store at the bottom of Bent Mountain. At Rierson's,​
farmers filled up trucks and teenagers smelling
of chicken shit drank soda and played pinball
​
after a shift packing eggs. He went to jail for that,
and though not as smart as him, I was the one who
drove down the mountain to college. Once, free
​
after school until our parents came home, Ben
showed me how to ping hubcaps from the ridge
below my house, over-pumping the Remington
​
and sighting over the creek and through the pines
at the occasional car weaving its way along
the narrow road, sinuous as a black snake
​
sunning in the grass. I took my shot at a green
station wagon moving slow as a hearse
but heard nothing, until a policeman's tires
​
churned gravel in the drive an hour later.
He stepped out of a blue-gray cloud
to find me whittling on the porch. No sir,
​
I said, hardly glancing up from my chunk
of wood. We were throwing rocks over the creek.
That was a walking stick in my hand. I had not
​
yet even asked a girl to dance, but there I sat
telling stories like I was born to it and couldn't stop.
​May I be struck dead where I stand, I said
​
to my father, later, looking square into his smelt-
colored eyes. And because I wasn't, by him
or God - I turned my back and walked.
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This World Should Be Enough
Walking the rails, looking out –
field daisies stand at attention,
and in the darkest hole along this long,
hot stretch, a big trout rolls. It’s the flash,
I guess, that catches my eye, and
the daisies, until further below
a fierce-headed merganser
zagging up current with six behind
makes me stop. Lord, I know that this is it.
This world should be enough. But the blue pulls
my eyes skyward then, and I am rising
above a man with everything to lose:
He’s looking downriver at a thread of water,
lit like a show-burning fuse.​​​​
Grown Boy Dreams of Water
I’m carrying a bucket down the mountain
again, looking for the creek’s moon-glint
because my mother’s rock-garden is dry,
but the closer I get, the more the water
curves away. I go off-trail, trying to correct,
but arm-thick laurel weaves green hells,
closing overhead, and as their pink buds swell,
I’m climbing – toward a keyhole that opens
into a bald of bounders. Here, above tree line,
the sky is a kerosene globe, trimmed low
enough for stars, which I see from the bottom
of my father’s johnboat – hauled from South
Carolina to central Appalachia and beached
on the edge of a field. Sometimes I’d unlean
it from its pine, tug it through tall grass
and stare into a deep blue ocean. For a time,
I fit between
the bench seats prone – a tiny bone in the boat’s deep ear, intent on the sound of water.
Going down the Hall on a Gurney
Beneath a silver sky,
men on mowers sheet
the wild green tongues
of a meadow. But that
must have been yesterday,
because now a half a dozen boys,
each as straight and tall as a little i
bend in the middle toward home,
singing Hey batter, batter -
Listen to my chatter, batter batter –
Su-wing! – an incantation cracked
open by wood on ball rising
so high it is a tiny comet skirting
the sun. It is streaking towards
a horse that always grazes
in the pasture beyond and now
the leftfielder launches: he hangs
suspended: I can see him clearly,
as if I were lying
in the grass beneath:
the glove hand, open wide
for something he can
never snare: the red cap,
name and number scrawled
black under the brim;
the red t-shirt, plump white P
over the heart, and blue
bell bottoms, yellow paisley
patches on each knee,
stretched tight and let out
twice for legs that trail
like a great heron
taking flight. Such awkward
beauty, I think, trying to make
out the face –
until the slightly parted lips
of a woman droop
into view; they lean
like a heavy bloom over
a still spring pool.
Can you tell me your name?
they say. And can you tell
me your date of birth? Yes,
I say to the white, blunt petals
of bloodroot that flutter
as she breaths. I was born in May,
I say to the purple
woods behind them.
I was born in May.
The Pond
Because two horses
lifted their heads beneath
an apple tree at the top of the hill
and snorted
I waded across the creek,
slipped beneath the barbed wire
that stitched the hem
of old man Warner’s field
and rowed my arms
through late summer grass
before stepping out of the field
and into the rut
the horses had made
to gorge on sweet green apples
spotted with mold
From beneath this tree,
I first saw old man Warner’s pond
pushing clouds along the earth
and that is when I first saw everything
that was between here and there
the smell of clover and carrion
the snap of grasshopper wings
the sudden cross of a red-tail blown sideways
and circling
watching everything below
even the bullfrogs flopping and turtles sliding
into dark water
I walked full ‘round twice,
not knowing what I had found
nor that this was the first of a thousand future leavings
of which I still can never tell anyone
where or why I am going.
​
"His poems - to paraphrase Seamus Heaney - “come at you sideways, and catch the heart off-guard and blow it open.”
Bill King wasn't a perfect person,
but he was an awfully good one. If you knew him, you already know
how lucky you are. If you didn’t,
allow me to introduce him the only
way I still can, through story and memory and the generous poems
he left us.
​
It is common knowledge that
Bill was a poet and a teacher, but he was also a husband, father, friend, obsessive gardener and semi-fanatical fisherman. Bill frequently referred
to himself as a “grown boy,” and
that’s how I remember him best.
He was proof that it’s possible to become an adult while keeping intact the sense of wonder that’s the
lingua franca of childhood.
That wonder made Bill an exemplary, much-praised teacher. His empathy, quality of attention, and bone-deep
love of this world made him a gifted poet and a treasured friend.
Professor Bill King taught literature
and writing to students at Davis and Elkins College in Elkins, West Virginia for 27 years. He was the grown-up
at the front of the classroom, yet he evangelized a child-like curiosity and excitement about literature as the only possible response to the miracle of the written word.
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He was also the guy in the neighborhood who had the greenest thumb, the biggest pumpkins, the sweetest-smelling roses and the hand-painted sign between his flowerbed
and the street that read, We love our sunshine, please consider parking a little further down the block.
"This was the first of a thousand future leavings / of which I still can never tell anyone / where or why I am going."
~ Bill King, "The Pond"
Bill had a wonderfully soft touch as an editor, always considering what I wanted
for the poem rather than what he wanted. He had a great ear for sound and a great
sense of whether an image was “true” or not. His feedback never failed to make my poems better. I hope he would have said the same of mine.
Bill always worked to convince his students that people from any cultural and
economic background could make art, could aspire to literature, could be themselves
and tell their stories and that those stories would be valuable to the world. Dozens of
his former students, some of whom graduated 20 years earlier, returned to Elkins for Bill's memorial, as did the nurses from Bill’s oncology ward who fell in love with his tenderness and good humor while he was under their care. That speaks volumes.
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Of course, for those who didn’t know Bill (and many who did), his poetry is his most durable and enduring legacy. As one might expect, Bill's poetry showcases
and explores his love of the natural world, West Virginia, the Appalachian region, fishing, his family and students, as well as his own mortality. It is a generous poetry
full of tenderness and close attention that rewards multiple readings.
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Of all the poems in Bloodroot, perhaps none offers a more accurate self-portrait than “Grown Boy Dreams of Water.” Water in all of its guises - streams, rivers,
rain and ponds - plays an important role in the mythology of Bill’s poems, as does dreaming, boyhood, and the importance of our connection to the natural world.
In this poem, the grown boy remembers the actual boy of his childhood, and the
dream journeys that are still possible before the tragedy of adolescence. Here, the
vehicle of the dream journey is his father’s displaced johnboat, made for the marshes
and estuaries of the coastal Carolinas, now dry-rotting in the mountains of Virginia.
​
(…) Here, above tree-line,
the sky is a kerosene globe trimmed low
enough for stars, which I see from the bottom
of my father’s johnboat—hauled from South
Carolina to central Appalachia and beached
on the edge of a field. Sometimes, I’d unlean
it from its pine, tug it through tall grass, and stare
into a deep blue ocean. (…)
from “The Grown Boy Dreams of Water”
While the story is never fully told, readers get a sense of the never-to-be-resolved
tension between the expectations of a stern Southern father and the gentler, more
open-hearted sensibilities of his dreamy poet son.
Bill had a gift for combining seemingly disconnected images into poems that are
both familiar and strange. In “Going Down the Hall on a Gurney,” for example,
the narrator, coming out of anesthesia after yet another cancer surgery, interrupts a
drug-induced reverie of boyhood baseball (Hey batter batter, listen to my chatter,
batter batter - Suh-wing!) with a hallucination of the lips of the surgical nurse.
In his anesthetized mind, they become the snowy-white petals of the bloodroot,
the delicate spring ephemeral that gives the book its title.
​
... Can you tell me your name?
they say, And can you tell me
your date of birth? Yes,
I say, to the white blunt petals
of bloodroot that flutter
as she breathes. I was born
in May, I say to the purple
woods behind them,
I was born in May.
from “Going Down the Hall on a Gurney”
This delightful, disorienting strangeness is but one of many enduring pleasures
to be found in Bill’s poems.
​​
On one of the last afternoons Bill and I spent working together on poems, we
sat in his backyard, going over the galleys of Bloodroot. He was so proud to see
his work presented so carefully and beautifully.
​
He was also excited at the prospect of traveling around the region giving readings,
once the book was published. He had made plans to read at the Southern Festival
of the Book that October, and at the Appalachian Studies Association Conference
the following spring. Sadly, Bill never read publicly from the book, but he would
have been delighted at its success.
​
That last afternoon, we sat in his back yard next to a fishpond no bigger than a
folding table, while we discussed Bloodroot and dreamed of giving readings and
traveling to conferences. Bill and his son Walter made that little pond, digging it out
and lining it, stocking it with fish and planting cattails along its bank. It was one of
his favorite places, appearing again and again in Bloodroot. One of my favorite
poems features that backyard pond and the frogs who’d visit each spring. In that poem, “Winter Song, ” he mourns the ephemeral nature of spring and longs to hear the spring peeper’s first call. It provides a perfect accidental elegy for my friend, himself a lover of evening rain.
​
(…) all of this has gone now
unfleshed except for sky
scarred with jet trails
going anywhere but here
lover of evening rain
lover of last light
lover of small still water
that gazes at leaves
all summer
come back
from “Winter Song”
The novelist Tom Robbins once wrote, “It’s never too late to have a happy childhood.” I think Bill believed that too and believed it was possible for everyone: his own amazing children (now grown), the boy whose blood he shed with a thrown stone forty years ago, the child that he himself was, and the “grown boy” he became, and by extension, you and me. Everyone. His optimism and open-heartedness live on in his powerful poems.
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Like the man himself, Bill’s poems are full of compassion and attention and intelligence. They are grounded in the natural world but establish no boundaries between where we end and the woods begin. His poems - to paraphrase
Nobel laureate Seamus Heaney - “come at you sideways, and catch the heart
off-guard and blow it open.”
​

Poets Bill King, John Hoppenthaler, and Doug Van Gundy
In 2021, Bill King received The Heartwood Poetry Award. In 2024, he was awarded
the Weatherford Prize for outstanding poetry for Bloodroot.
Davis and Elkins College has re-named their Writers Week, which Bill created,
to "Dr. Bill King Writers’ Week.”
Doug Van Gundy directs the Low-Residency MFA program in Creative Writing at West Virginia Wesleyan College in Buckhannon, WV. His poems and essays are widely anthologized and have appeared in dozens of journals. He co-edited the anthology Eyes Glowing at the Edge of the Woods: Contemporary Writing from
West Virginia and published a book of poems, A Life above Water (Red Hen Press). His second poetry collection is forthcoming. He has played fiddle, guitar,
mandolin, banjo and harmonica for 27 years in the old-time string duo, Born Old.

​
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The Wasp
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Like green willows cut back, then cut
again, the surgeon’s scalpel removes each
season’s stubborn new growth, stunted
by poisonous drip. I zombie to work
and back, yet live, and in living, love
and grieve all those who came before,
who risked and lost—pounds of flesh
and good-time friends, and that one
last hope, before the end. I can’t call it
a win - what they’ve given. Time.
To scrutinize eternity—as carefully
as this wasp perched on the rounded
hill of my eraser. Forced out the vent
by the first furnace blast of the year,
she makes one tiny-footed, antennae-
twitching rotation, before flying
toward the arched forest of golden
fern just outside the window.
Trapped, she bumps from glass
to glass, seeking late autumn light.
Though frost soon rimes the grass,
and I’ve little energy to muster,
I offer the sugared lip of my coffee
cup and walk her out the door.
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​​​​​
Winter Song
after W.S. Merwin
I miss the spring peeper
who crawled out
the rain fed pond
all summer
until each one
green and wood frogs too
buried themselves in mud
beneath ice or snow
and I miss the first big rain
that made little throats trill
from bent stems
of elderberry and curly willow
from green leaves of young maple
that shade the street
behind the grocer
that faces route 33
and the rest of the world
all of this has gone now
unfleshed except for sky
scarred with jet trails
going anywhere but here
lover of evening rain
lover of last light
lover of small still water
that gazes at leaves
all summer
come back
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Bloodroot tributes
and reviews
Bloodroot knows what the land knows. Each of these exquisitely crafted, deeply ecological, humid poems accumulate into a "bildungsroman" for the grown. May it be offered at every library, every hospital chapel, every seed store in the valleys. Bill King has given us an instant classic. . - Poetry Daily
Bill King does not avoid asking the big questions. ... It is the speaker’s consistent, childlike curiosity that allows him to become transfixed at a pond’s surface reflecting the sky, in wonder about “everything / that was between here and there.” “Here” being the physical world, “there” being the spiritual or metaphysical.
- Still, The Journal
I think Bill, in Bloodroot, whether you were a friend or a stranger to him, left us what he most wanted us to know: how to be in the world in such a way that when you come to die you won’t discover that you haven’t lived.
- Gordon Johnson, poet
"Beautiful, honest, generous, the poems in Bloodroot ask us to look closely at what we often call the dying world and instead see the thousand daily resurrections there,"
- Ann Pancake, WV author
"He writes with the deep intelligence that knits the natural world to metaphor and gives us a usable model for how to love this mortal place even as we know we are leaving it."
- Marc Harshman. WV poet laureate
One more word from Bill:
My advice: Find your sacred spaces, whether physical or virtual, visit them as often as possible, and guard them jealously.
- Columbia (University) Journal​